Nemo & Wormy
One dark yukky morning Nemo woke up and went and had a swim around the undersea world.After a while nemo saw something that was moving on the seafloor and got a bit scared because he did not know what it was.Nemo swam slowly to the scary thing that he saw so he could see what it was.When nemo was very close to it,it was a sea worm that was lonely staying on the seafloor all by himself board.Nemo felt sad for the little poor sea worm and told him if he wanted to come and play with him.The sea worm said no thank you because he was busy laying his eggs.SO I said ok then sea worm buy see you next time.
THE END
WALT:make a explanation writing about a picture of nemo and a sea worm.
I learnt about animals I didn't know.
I also learnt about the picture that we wrote about.
Great story Nita.Can you spot some missing capital letters? Also- were we writing an explanation? Did you explain how or why something happens? You are writing, but you are writing a narrative. I wonder if you can also put the picture of the sea worm and fish so people can see what picture you were writing about. I like that you've used descriptive adjectives "Nemo swam slowly to the scary thing". Very exciting words! :)
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