Thursday 19 November 2015

Phases of the moon

WALT: explain the phases of the moon.
I hope you comment on my blog so I know
what I need to work on.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Lasinita,
    I really like the way you talking about the different kinds of moons.
    I also like the way you wrote lots of long sentences.
    But maybe next time you should add in what you learnt.
    Great work!!!

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  2. Wow Lasinita I like the way you where talking about the ways the moon can change and I also like the way you told us why the moon shines because I never knew that the sun was on the other side shining, I don't think there is anything wrong with your work but I have 1 question How did you get the most interesting words and facts.

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